2008년 10월 31일 금요일
using adjective "ambitious"
I am a very ambitious person. I plan to go to MIT and then follow a career in architecture. I want to build something that will make everyone around the world to know my name. My ultimate goal is to get my name on the Oxford English Dictonary. That's what I would call ambitious.
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Irene: Tiny grammar/word choice mistakes. See below.
BEFORE:
I am a very ambitious person. I plan to go to MIT and then follow a career in architecture. I want to build something that will make everyone around the world to know my name. My ultimate goal is to get my name on the Oxford English Dictonary. That's what I would call ambitious.
AFTER:
I am a very ambitious person. I plan to go to MIT and then pursue a career in architecture. I want to build something that will make everyone around the world know my name. My ultimate goal is to get my name in the Oxford English Dictonary. That's what I would call ambitious.
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